At present, China is considering whether or not to push back the retirement age. The topic

At present, China is considering whether or not to push back the retirement age. The topic has been hotly debated since it first surfaced. What is your view on this？ Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: Should the Retirement Age be Pushed Back？ In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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